Following a train of memories through
Snapshots and videos, part of the treasury too
Traveling back in time, a timeless journey
changing styles, different moods,frozen for all to see
Flying on wings of hope and dreams
footprints to be etched, a mark to be made,
A travel forward, the future's new
Do you see you?
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The prompt at WRITERS is time travel......
Sunday, February 17, 2008
Timeless!!!
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memories r timeless...
Keshi.
These are precious...and the last line is just so lovely
What a lovely picture you paint of memories and dreams.. Both are timeless and precious.. The last line was the best... "Do you see you?"
Hey the new look and title is good :) Loved it!!
Memories frozen in time. Lovely thought, lovely words and fascinating conclusion!
I think we both saw the prompt extremely similar ways, I had something very similar in my drafts to post later.
I like the way you ended the post, do you see you? I think I dont just see "me" :)
looking back and forward, nicely done
what a perfect picture to accompany,the back and forth movement of the pendulum makes it perfect...!
As I indicate on my prompt post, memory is a time machine all its own.
We are always somewhere between our pasts and our futures, that fleeting moment we call as now - the present. It is fascinating to both look back and forward as much as it is always great to live and seize the present, the moment.
I wish you well.
~ Jeques
Mmemory are nutshell of time travel.
seeds travelling through time
Love the pendulum! LovE the POem! excellent response to this prompt! :))
..train of memories... what a trip!
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