Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Its magic!!!



Bare feet on grass, tired no more
Colors in the sky, a rainbow so high
Splashing in puddles, getting wet
Magical moments not to forget


A kick reminds; a little life here to stay
First steps; first smile; revel in the magic so new
Kiss away the pain, hug way the fear
The magic touch of love, every child’s due


Miles become shorter, calls connect
Families drawn closer, a magic of the web
A journey to places beyond, on big iron birds
A travel to fantasy on a carpet of words


Moments of joy, moments of love
Moments shot and frozen, sent to all
Wave that wand of awe, its magic that you see,
Its magic if only you want it to be

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Go to writer's island for more magic

19 comments:

Jeques said...

Magic seen in multitude of ways, from many different lights with one common impact: Bliss.

It is good to realize that joy comes along with magical moments.

Great precious pieces!

I wish you well.

~ Jeques

Guruprasad said...

hey, i didn't know about this blog at all! my first time here :)

the magic that we see around is always in our heads. during the magical moments that we feel, we see magic everywhere around us.

but what is even more magical thatn all this is the ability to transfer a little of that magical moment to others through words! thanks for sharing this magic with me :)

Rambler said...

I really liked the ending, its magic if you want it to be :)
hey you have changed your style of writing.. liked this one

Ziah said...

I like your take on Magic:) It is often magic if you like it to be:)

lissa said...

how beautifully written, how lucky to be a kid sometimes

Preethi said...

Loved it.. magic is what you want it to be indeed.. this was so beautiful.. I am having brain cramps.. so no writer's island post this week too..

UL said...

very interesting indeed.. it's magic.

Prats said...

Thought i'd left a comment here when I came here last...looks like the mind's hallucinating :)

This was pure magic...loved the lines **Kiss away the pain, hug way the fear
The magic touch of love, every child’s due**

Something that will never change over years....

romila said...

Precious little nuggets of life,
but precious and magical only "if you want it to be". How true!

keith hillman said...

Life itself is magic. A lovely piece.

Lucy said...

this post is magic! I love what you've captured and feel the same way about childhood! :))

rayshma said...

that was SO beautiful... :)

tumblewords said...

For sure! Magic if you want it to be! Lovely poem...

sandesh said...

Nice to read, liked it very much

Just Jen said...

I'd say this is more than an attempt at magic!
I love the line, "A travel to fantasy on a carpet of words"
The whole thing is good!

Padma said...

wow, beautiful. Love all your blogs.

Pri said...

very nice!:)

///Moments of joy, moments of love
Moments shot and frozen, sent to all
Wave that wand of awe, its magic that you see,
Its magic if only you want it to be///
loved these lines...

keep writing!

Compassion Unlimitted said...

Wish I could close my eyes and read the beautiful words..It could well transport one to that wonderful time frame and simply enjoy it more.
More of the magic needed suma
TC
CU

Madhumita. said...

Loved the lay-out. "The magic touch of love, every child's due" ... wish every child DID get their due ...

 
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